Poem 4 Translation Notes, Tao Te Ching



Here is the 4th poem in Putonghua with English gloss. The hanzi are taken from Yellowbridge.

(The Classical Chinese words are listed here alphabetically with English gloss, you may want to open it in a separate window.)

沖, 盈。
dào zhong1, ér yòng zhī hùo yíng
way cup, yet use of perhaps not become full
兮, 宗﹔
yuān wàn zhī zōng
abyss (pause) seems myriad object of worship
銳, 紛,
cùo rùi, jiě fēn
defeat that sharp, separate that varied
光, 塵﹔
guāng, tóng chén,
harmony that glossy, similar that dust,
存。
zhàn hùo cún
sunked (pause) seems perhaps exist
子?
zhī shéi zhī
I not know who of child
先。
xiàng zhī xiān
image emperor of before

Bikol Translation
Here is the translation.

4
Чan Paчagih saroŋ panharok
Sah paggamit daчih napapanoч
Pagkararum.
Siriŋ sah sanlaksaŋ bagaybagay nah sarambahon

Minadaчog sah matarum,
Minahurusay sah чiribaчibah.
Minaчuruyon sah makikintab,
Minapaчagid sah maчaчalpog.

Pagkalubog.
Siriŋ sah garoh yaчon
Daчih koh чaram kuŋ kiчisay nah чakiч
Ladawan nin suчanoy nah hadeч.

Translation Notes
I translated dào here as “Paчagi” since that is what I think is the abstract meaning in this instance. I don’t exactly remember the term for the water dipper so I used “panharok”. I used “pagkararum” instead of “kararuman” since the implied meaning is not the depths, but the state of being deep. fēn could mean also “saralak” or mixed, which are to be sorted, so “husay” is to be used not “laчin” to separate and sort. I cannot use “lubtoh” for sunked since it just means to dip but not necessarily mean submerged. There is no word for emperor in Bikol, so I used the word “hadeч” or king.

My Interpretation.
The Way can be likened to a dipper. It never gets filled, even when constantly used. It can go deep; profound like objects of worship. It defeats the sharp, sorts the mixed, harmonizes the shiny, makes similar the dusty. It exists even if dipped, sunked and submerged. No one knows where its from. Its like an image or symbol of a potentate of ancient times.

A Side Note
This description of the Way as a dipper reminds me of my youth when I stayed with my grandmother who lived close to the woods. She owns a big clay water jar (dulay) which she uses to store drinking water. It has a covering and to get water in it, I have to use a coconut shell dipper. That was a long time ago and I don’t have a photo of it. But have a look at the photoss shown below.

Photo of a clay jar from this site.

The dipper is like this dipper beside the jar, but made of ordinary-looking coconut shell and with a short handle made of bamboo..

It looks very similar except that there is no rosary and no faucet. It is put up high above the ground called banggirahan like this stock photo but bigger. Here is a photo from of an uncleaned water jar that has moss in it. Water jars have to be cleaned regularly to be very hygienic.

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